In class we are learning to write recounts.
I enjoyed pair assessing.
I found using adjectives tricky.
Our success criteria was...
*Use some long and some short sentence
*Use adjectives and adverbs
*Use juicy verbs to start a sentence
*Use a simile or metaphor
*Keep to one main idea in each paragraph
* Edit for spelling and punctuation
*Use a hook
“We're here” my mum exclaimed as I slowly woke up from a long sleep in the car. Where in Napier. Arriving at the hotel was very surprising because it was a five star hotel “WOW” I remarked, my dad repeated me.We walked to the counter, slowly admiring the painting.The next morning we got up earlier than ever to take my mum to a bus that would take her to Cape Kidnappers. After a while, we had to pick up Mum, but unfortunately we missed her come in and get a medal. After all that, we went to the ocean spa, Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh we went in a boiling hot spa and a freezing cold spa. The absolutely freezing cold pool was taller than my dad by about 3 inches so it was really hard to stay up “Dad! Help!” I would say as I slowly drifted under the water.
Then we drove back to Gisborne.